Thia blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, through to Tamaki College.
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Wednesday, 5 September 2018
My Athlete
My athlete is Yohan Blake he came 2nd in the race against Usain Bolt. And others he could of came first place but he was to slow for Usain Bolt. Yohan Blake was so happy that he placed 2nd he wasn’t angry that he came 2nd he was probably proud of coming 2nd. For Jamaica Yohan and Usain Bolt are good friends plus Warren Weir was there friend to. They all hugged after the race and they were so happy that all tree of them made their country proud.
Tuesday, 9 May 2017
complex sentences
Today for writing i answered some questions that relate to complex sentences
Thursday, 9 February 2017
how are Glass bottles recycled
Identify the structural features of an explanation text
Tuesday, 13 December 2016
Thursday, 1 December 2016
camp bentzon 2016


Last week we went to Kawau Island. I looked around and saw a cool place. There was a mansion on the island “Wow!’’ I said. When we got to the camp we had to go for a hike up a mountain named killer mountain. We heard there were wallabies. It was so so tiring while hiking.I was huffing and puffing and it was so boring.
When we got to camp we had lunch and skimmed some rocks then Mr Jacobson said stop, skimming rocks there's a stingray. After we saw the stingray we had lunch and played a game then we had to go so we went back to Camp Bentzon. Were so tired that we could not walk my legs were so tired, I just stopped walking. When we had free time suddenly my legs woke up and I ran to play outside.
We were playing volleyball, baseball, cricket, swimming, touch and those were the games we were allowed to play for free. The next day we had activities the first activity we did was hut building me and tivita made a man hut well Aneelis and some other girls were cheating and using other people's huts to uses for their hut.
My favorite activity was sailing because I was the man I knew how to sail but fell out of the sailing boat it was so freezing when I fell in the water. I loved camp bentzon course we had ice cream,apple crumble and bombed off the pontoon wished if i could go back to camp.
Wednesday, 31 August 2016
Mason goes fishing
Mason went fishing at night with his sister Samantha. Then a big snapper came and Mason caught it. His sister said “put it back’’. But Mason didn’t listen he said “I want it, why can’t we take it”. Because it might have babies’’ replied Samantha “what? impossible how can you tell?’ asked Mason.
Dad came along and told them to put it back because it might have babies and we need to make sure that we have more fish in the future. That's what I said replied Samantha. Mason put the big Snapper back in the water and started crying. And the next day Mason And His sister and Dad went to Mcdonald’s for dinner.
Tuesday, 23 August 2016
Holiday writing
On the holiday’s I went to my cousins and played on the xbox. Then we went to the pools and did bombs. And we went back home and we were playing with the lego. Then I made are big machine gun it had ballets in the machine gun. The machine gun had a rubber band inside and I but the ballet in the gun. And I shot my cousins face he was crying and then. I had to make another gun with no ballets. And it was so cool I dropped it and broke it I just went and played with my. Older brother ricky we were playing boxing with the billow. My other cousins came and played with us it was so fun.
Thursday, 11 August 2016
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