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Thursday 10 November 2016

peter October e-AsTTle Writing Test - 2016

One day their was a man his name was Jack and a girl her name was rihanna a they came on there car. And they were best friends they went for a  walk to this bush and rihanna said  it’s so foggy? Where are you going said jack she couldn't see and it went silent no one. Talked but you could only hear a big fat frog hopping and hopping and hopping. And Jack was running so fast it was like a police running after him. The big problem was that a crocodile was right next to rihanna.It was staring right at Jack and was so scared rihanna was knocked out and she was bleeding so hard. Jack ran away to there car to run over the crocodile when he got there he was so scared that more crocs will come finally the crocodile. ran said Jack but the crocodile was at the back of the tree and when Jack came out of the car the crocodile came out with more and more crocodiles he was so so so so scared he was shaking so fast. He just knocked himself out and the next day rihanna woke up.